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C&C my most recent work!
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eeewww l2gfx newb 
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Honestly, I cannot find anything wrong with this signature. It looks amazing. Job well done.
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No Frills wrote:Honestly, I cannot find anything wrong with this signature. It looks amazing. Job well done.
I've got one! The text is meh. Thanks though ^^
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i like it tbh..
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Only thing I don't like is the Text.
The rest is perfect.
The rest is perfect.
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yeah the text is a little blurred
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Work on the text. and lol @ justin's contradiction.
Stock plz? for comparison
Stock plz? for comparison
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Nice. I like how you toned it down and made it a cool blue color.
Nice sharpening on the arm.
Nice sharpening on the arm.
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. alot of people notice the sharpening and the pentool, but not the c4d's on the bottom and the ones that look like rocks in the background. Nobody notices the spots i added around the flames either 
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imo pentool is fail, really sexy render and outcome tho =]
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The thing with vert sigs is that you still need to keep one main focal, which is sort of hard to do. I find that my eye is dragged around in this piece.
The effects seem sort of random, in some parts they're fine, but in others they seem sort of random and misplaced.
The blending isn't to bad, but it's over-done in some places (his head for example), and this takes away from the part that should be the focal. It's also over-sharpened in some areas.
Text could do with a bit of work. And I don't even know why you gay tooled around his arm.
The slight patches of blue you've added in help, but you could have mixed it up a little more, it's a little monochromatic right now. Maybe use it a little stronger next time.
Depth could also do with a bit of work.
And finally, the lighting. It's pretty off right now. Maybe try looking at the stock to see how the lighting should go. That way you have something to base your lighting off of.
The effects seem sort of random, in some parts they're fine, but in others they seem sort of random and misplaced.
The blending isn't to bad, but it's over-done in some places (his head for example), and this takes away from the part that should be the focal. It's also over-sharpened in some areas.
Text could do with a bit of work. And I don't even know why you gay tooled around his arm.
The slight patches of blue you've added in help, but you could have mixed it up a little more, it's a little monochromatic right now. Maybe use it a little stronger next time.
Depth could also do with a bit of work.
And finally, the lighting. It's pretty off right now. Maybe try looking at the stock to see how the lighting should go. That way you have something to base your lighting off of.
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Thats the C&C I needed. Thanks mlp <3
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